Rough cut comments

I picked 6 people to assess my rough cut.I asked each person to tell me the main aspect that could be changed in order to make our music video great. These are the comments that I received.

Comment 1: On beat editing rarely takes place in your music video.

Solution to the problem: I am going to add more cuts and transitions on beat in order to grab the audiences attention in order to attract their attention.

Comment 2: The start of the music video hasn't irrelevant music playing.

Solution to the problem: I am going to extend the music or maybe add a scene that complements the lyrics of the song.

Comment 3: Some of the lip syncing isn't in sync with the song.

Solution to the problem: I plan to edit the lip syncing in order to make sure that it is in sync with the music.

Comment 4: Most of the shots are too long.

Solution to the problem:  This could result in the audience loosing interest in the music video. In order to prevent this i am going to shorten the shots. However, I'm not going to make them too short that prevents the audience from looking at them.

Comment 5: There isn't a variety of locations.

Reason why there isn't a variety of locations is because we plan to add effects and filming in different locations may hinder us from adding these effects to the music video.

Comment 6: Some of the clips are slotted in random places.

Reason: This is because we wanted to have an idea of where these shots fit into our music video.

Solution: Myself and Rayanne is going to discuss where each clip belongs when we do our final editing and fit each shot accordingly.